NeoD-ray's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vincent Again]

Mmmmh yeah, it was a good idea to remove the scarf. I like him more!

[Character Touch-Ups]

I like the one in the middle.

[SPAH]

Smoke weed everyday.

[Vincent But With Clothes]

Really nice! I like it more as a whole now.
The body shape is particular, and I like it! But the scarf looks
abit monotonous... I mean, I saw it in alot of charaters (by the way, it's just my personal tought). Also, I think it would be a problem when making his facial expressions.

The choice of the color of the skin doesn't sound bad, but make sure to try more.
Alot of times I've made a character of mine with a specific color in mind, but when I actually gave him that color it looked weird and out of context sometimes.

The clothes choice is purely dedicated to the character. If it's kind of a normal guy, these clothes fits him really nice.
All depends on his personality! :D

Nice job by the way, keep drawing characters!

[Silent Sarah]

I like the tags. xD

[Criminal Fiends]

"Perfection has no age."

[A Chase]

This is the first drawing where I put 5 stars.
The design is amazing and the colors are "meteorophic" (I know that it doesn't have any sense, but my lungs started dying when I saw this picture).

The only two things I suggest is to add something that enphatise the movement, because they look quite still, and to to pay attention to the flying monster's last fingers.

The left hand is supposed to be round, but the last finger is way out. The right hand is ok, but the last finger here seems to be almost impaled on the side of the hand. Making it a bit

Even tho I admire the design, the imagination and the characters.

Y O U A R E G R E A T !

+ 5 0 0 . 0 0 0

[Otter Doodles]

Aawww! <3
I found it adorable!

Uh... sorry... back to the review...

Even if it's a doodle, I think you made it look awesome! The color is balanced and natural! Not too much bright and flat neither.

I'll not look at the proportions (even tho they are made quite good) because it's a doodle. So...
Nothing else! Really, even the expressions you gave him look convincing!

I just really like it! :D
Hope to see more of yours in the art portal!

[2019-04-03 - Impact]

Those eyes are the only things that still not make him/her look like an heartless being. Intimidating tho...

Anyway! The colors you used are perfect for the warm aspect that he/she is supposed to make you feel.
The proportions are pretty good! Except the legs, they look a bit... big? I don't know if the character have such big tights, but it doesn't make him/her look fast. She/he looks a bit goofy. :0

A saw you also stated "Anger" in the tags, but his pose looks more calm than that. I mean, you could make him/her in a more dinamic pose! Like preparing for an attack or something.
Or if you want to keep the fist pose, you can just emphatise it more!
Talking about the fist, it looks confusing. I don't know if he/she is wearing a glove or something, but those circles doesn't make it look clear... :/

The design itself is pretty good! Nothing to say about that! The helmet looks awesome, I mean, I really like it. :P
I also kinda like the palette of the armor! It's not super exagerated as I normally expect!

By the way, I can just conclude that you have a good mind and fantasy, you just need some practice in poses! Hope to see more original characters like this from ya! ;D

Keep going!

[Vincent]

Vincent...
I like this name! Wanna meet my friend T R A X I M U S ?

Haha! Anyway...
this little dude looks promising! Even tho the greenish skin reminds me of Galactix.
Character design is something really rare these days between young artists, because "Oh no, if I draw my characters nobody notices me! Buhu!"

...so please... keep going! :D

But for now, I'm not satisfied... yet...
Would you mind to send me a message when the final design is over? I'd really like to see it! <3

ItsJustVanilla responds:

I just put up another design for Vincent if you would like to see the changes I have made so far.