NeoD-ray's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Do What I Say]

Man I love the expression of the guy.
Just one thing, pay attention on how he is holding the sword; it looks quite odd to me.

[Fantasy Bad Guys]

I really like the one on the left!
It has an interesting design, even for a simple doodle!
You know, the best things sometimes happen when you don't even try.

Hope to see more!

Doodlino responds:

Glad ya like it!

[Wheelie Boy]

Why not coloring it mate?
Hit me up with a private message if you did it.

ALhedgehogh responds:

Wheelie Boy defies color! But I might splash some on him later.

[Girl w/o bangs (color scheme version)]

I asked you for the color scheme because it was pretty hard to criticise a sketch.
By the way, this drawing got my attention because of the style of it.
It's not ground breaking but it feels different in some way or another!

About the drawing...
Everything looks pretty much correct except the eyelashes and the hand.

The right eyelash in particular is still on top of the eye, even if the eyelid is closed (just a little mistake, nothing THAT wrong).

The hand, instead, has a problem with the thumb as it doesn't look in a comfy position.
I would have drawn it in a more extended position instead, it looks bdaly folded here.

In the end is a very cute little drawing. You just need to add atleast abit of colour to your drawings or they will easily be marked as "sketches" and ignored (which is a shame).

Keep up!

Convert2Double responds:

I don't think doodles count as sketches to be fair. Also, the eyelash and the hand mistakes are accidental, as I drew this from boredom. Apart from my stupid excuses in this piece done for fun, I know how stuff works

Edit: I fixed it now! All is well :)

[Girl w/o bangs]

Give her a color scheme and hit me up with a Private Message.

Convert2Double responds:

Sounds good to me!

[The Brains to Rule Lylat]

Andross, for god sake, show your TRUE form. I don't understand...

[False Profit]

IN-CRE-DI-BLE

It's hard for me to give such vote, but I can't hold myself this time.
Is easier to find gold in my basement than finding a good original character!
I love everything of this! The design, the expressions, the immagination!

It has everything! My man/lady you are a hero to me.

[Lil room]

I can only see the Bullet Kin from Enter the Gungeon nad a pickaxe (maybe minecraft).

[Sanctuary]

You look like Little Mac.

[Fio]

Fatty Fio needs some love too! Why none loves fatty Fio?