NeoD-ray's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[DeStress Oni]

I don't like the dentist, he doesn't give me any candy after the visit. T_T

Anyway! Great great job!
The portrait is complete for what it wants to show! The colours are well chosen, no repetition or weird palettes.

The only thing I want you to look out is his left horn, I don't think it's that big! :0
But I surpass this only mistake, mainly because it's just a sketch.
And for being a scatch, it's nicely made!

By the way, good job! ;)

[Clefairy says... Hard mode!]

I like the whole concept, and also love the fact that you explained it!
The coloring is pretty good, but is easily noticeable that you mainly focused
on Clefairy...

The background has alot of errors, and the floor have a wrong prospective.
I mean, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but doesn't catch real well...

If you like to concentrate better on the character's proportion, make the background simple! :D
So people will ignore it, or just focus better on the characters.

By the way, nothing can't be fixed with some practice! Just keep going!

WOLF777MX responds:

Thanks you NeoD!, and yeah, you got me there!, I put a lot of effort on Clefairy and I was pretty lazy with background, it wasn't intentional that it look in that way, but I was so tired of this one because I took more than I expected, that I decided to rush out with it.

Also thank you for the advise, I'll improve my digital skills to get better the backgrounds :D

[Dia de los Muertos]

"Love? Love is for living..."

Awesome work! Sadly is a pixel art...
Not that I hate them, but I would have prefered a normal render. :P

[M O T H M A N 4]

It must be upset for the raise of oil's value. ,':|

By the way, you made a really awesome job on this one! Mothman is clearly visible and his pose really fits the character! Reflections are really accurate and satisfying for the eye!
The lighting is awesome, not forced and realistic!

Sadly you didn't even gave a bit of background... :c
I would have suggested to you atleast some simple lines of other building or trees...
But it's really nice anyway!

Hope to never meet this version of Mothman one day. It gives me the creeps...

[A Kappa]

Wow, magnificent coloring man... seriously.
For a moment I tought that it wasn't made on a PC.

You really like the monster like design of the Yokais, you do?
Then, why not creating one by yourself? Your will to write so much about this Kappa made me think that you could be a good character/creature designer!

Just think about it. Even just cruel doodles can become something awesome you know?

Hope to see something creative from you in the future. Your style would sure make it charming, even if is simple like Kirby!

Also, even if this Kappa is adorable, I'm still scared of them... sorry...

nightmareSyrup responds:

Thank you and no worries I do make my own monsters from time to time, it's kinda hard to write descriptions without making them too OP. I drew Yokai, because their designs, origins and stories are fun :}

['bout time i introduced y'all to my frog boy]

Very, very simple...
Very, very cool!

I like the high amount pf colors you used! The prospective of the gun it's really accurate.
The character itself his cool, as I stated above, but you can improve even more!

The head is one of the best way to make characters different from eachother, so don't keep it flat! :D

By the way, posing is brilliant, realistic and gives a good feeling. It doesn't look forced.
I can clearly feel the unconfortable position of your FrogBoy!

[Fio Germi]

She is the only female character I love!
Ah yeah, sorry.

Nice drawing! Nothing else to say!

[How you doing there?]

Finally, someone used the age rating correctly.

CaseterMK responds:

Dont wanna upset people.

[freezypops]

VEGETA

[Comfy Reading]

You know, you start thinking how non-accultured piece of mud you are, when your cat reads more than you.

Just kidding, I don't have a cat. And an accultured mind... :|
Anyway... the composition is clear and warm! I would like to be that cat right now...

One thing, pay attention to the mountain background, it doesn't look right, I mean, if the house isn't perpendicularly posed.
Probably you wanted to show a nice background with an interesting look of the room, but it doesn't feel right. From that angle you could only see the lake, or part of the field.
See what I'm saying?

By the way, your is a great drawing! The choose of colors gives the feeling of the scene, the calm and warm ambience of it. Seriously, nice colors, you got straight to the point!

Hope to see more of your works in the featured art section! <3