NeoD-ray's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[robocroc]

Really cool mate! He kinda remind me of the Triceratons.
I don't know why.

By the way, the only thing I don't like is the gap between the teeth. There is literally nothing in there.

Oh yeah this might be your style of drawing, and hands down I'm the last one that want people to change their style, but I'd appreciate atleast a darker color at the left side of the gap.
Making it look more of a mouth than a pair of scissors. :0

In the end, it's really cool! Keep drawing like this amount of immagination, it damn works! :D

FeedMeBadThings responds:

Thanks! I totally agree with your critique. At the time it was a stylistic choice to give the silhouette a more "Rocko's Modern Life" 2D feel where the perspective is screwed, but in retrospect, I agree that I should have covered the gap (especially where the armored collar should be).

Thanks again for the critique and kind words!

[To-Do List]

Here's my to do list:
-Give congratulations to ToonHole
-Give congratulations to ToonHole
-Give congratulations to ToonHole
-Give congratulations to ToonHole
-Give congratulations to ToonHole

By the way, awesome comic man! Simple and really funny! :D

ToonHole responds:

To-Do List:
1) Reply to your comment and tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to read what I've drawn and give me feedback and mention that you should have a great week.
2) Laundry

[Vincent]

Vincent...
I like this name! Wanna meet my friend T R A X I M U S ?

Haha! Anyway...
this little dude looks promising! Even tho the greenish skin reminds me of Galactix.
Character design is something really rare these days between young artists, because "Oh no, if I draw my characters nobody notices me! Buhu!"

...so please... keep going! :D

But for now, I'm not satisfied... yet...
Would you mind to send me a message when the final design is over? I'd really like to see it! <3

ItsJustVanilla responds:

I just put up another design for Vincent if you would like to see the changes I have made so far.

[Clefairy says... Hard mode!]

I like the whole concept, and also love the fact that you explained it!
The coloring is pretty good, but is easily noticeable that you mainly focused
on Clefairy...

The background has alot of errors, and the floor have a wrong prospective.
I mean, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but doesn't catch real well...

If you like to concentrate better on the character's proportion, make the background simple! :D
So people will ignore it, or just focus better on the characters.

By the way, nothing can't be fixed with some practice! Just keep going!

WOLF777MX responds:

Thanks you NeoD!, and yeah, you got me there!, I put a lot of effort on Clefairy and I was pretty lazy with background, it wasn't intentional that it look in that way, but I was so tired of this one because I took more than I expected, that I decided to rush out with it.

Also thank you for the advise, I'll improve my digital skills to get better the backgrounds :D

[A Kappa]

Wow, magnificent coloring man... seriously.
For a moment I tought that it wasn't made on a PC.

You really like the monster like design of the Yokais, you do?
Then, why not creating one by yourself? Your will to write so much about this Kappa made me think that you could be a good character/creature designer!

Just think about it. Even just cruel doodles can become something awesome you know?

Hope to see something creative from you in the future. Your style would sure make it charming, even if is simple like Kirby!

Also, even if this Kappa is adorable, I'm still scared of them... sorry...

nightmareSyrup responds:

Thank you and no worries I do make my own monsters from time to time, it's kinda hard to write descriptions without making them too OP. I drew Yokai, because their designs, origins and stories are fun :}

[How you doing there?]

Finally, someone used the age rating correctly.

CaseterMK responds:

Dont wanna upset people.

[Benny - Prickle Perch]

Another great piece of art!
The look of the scene is intense, proportions are very convicing and the composition is damn balanced!

Obliviously, CaptainFailMore did a great job too with the buildings and the monster (I hate drawing backgrounds too).

Only one thing, The Rescued.
Keep an eye on his legs, just like the Dragon's drawing!

The Rescued (forgive me for not knowing the name) looks afraid about the debrites of the wall next to him, or just the wall.
Why would he stretch his legs like that? I would probably flex them to avoid contact.
Also, Benny looks incredibly fast here, it's pretty unfitting the fact that The Rescued can stretch his legs without fatigue.

In the end, thanks for the new desktop wallpaper!

AVENGEDOG responds:

Yo, thanks for the compliments and the great advice on both of my Benny pics! I'll try and work on the acting more in future pictures, and I'm glad you're using this as a wallpaper!

[Tom Fulp Gif!]

Can you taste it? I can taste it...

ChutneyGlaze responds:

the fulp fumes?

[OC Request - Ari]

I find it an extremely good looking character! Could you tell me more about it? Somethin like his character! :D

cherrygrabber responds:

Hmm.... well she's requested by BroxRox, and all he can say in the description was, "The gremlin brat."
So yeah, I guess she is.

[Magenta girl]

I like his expression! Also, the colors a pretty much the same, but even that, they doesn't bore the watcher! Just the hand looks kinda of nosense compared to the entire pic...
But who knows? I don't know what is happening! xD

Also, you took a nice choice from your art folder.

nickowl responds:

I'm working on using more interesting colors in my drawings, but that's something I will practice little by little. Also yeah I agree with that, the hand was like that in the original drawing (this was a redraw basically) so I wanted to keep that element xd

Oh, and thanks alot for the feedback!! :D